I shared my ideas and concerns with Pearse and he seemed to understand where I was coming from (what a great person!) so we have developed a basic plot adaptation to our original idea. We plan on maintaining the idea that the main character is leaving for college. As they leave for college they reflect on their pay as memories begin to pop up when they are packing up.
Our new character: Pearse!!!! (I still believe it should be his sister but we’ll see if he makes it work)
Our new setting: Pearse’s home!!! We will be shooting fresh footage and use mise en scene elements to elevate the idea that he is officially leaving for college.
Plot: A little different. The main character is packing up when he goes to his garage and picks up a box he thought was filled with his stuff and he finds something different. Inside the box there are a ton of CDs and discs filled with hours of footage from his childhood which is now ending. The flashbacks will be focused on showing the type of person that makes him who he is today and he gets emotional, a bittersweet moment.
I hope you guys like it!
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