Major Changes

Issues with our plot:

Pearse and I just got off a phone call and I want to summarize really quickly what we talked about. To begin with we have decided to change the plot but keep the main idea of our short movie. Talking over the phone we realized that our current plot was gonna come out too cheesy and wouldn’t show any effort. This is because we were thinking of creating a montage of the times this group of friends would spend together. However, having such a large cast was also beginning to bring up a lot of problems with scheduling. We decided not to force anything and just adapt to the situation and this is what we came up with.

Our Changes:

Like I mentioned before the leaving for college theme is still in play. Now we are gonna be focusing more on one main character instead of a group of people. So the new story revolves around a female who’s picking for college and she’s getting her stuff ready to leave but as she does that she starts looking at the images around her rooms. She starts to look at her photo albums, Polaroids, all types of pictures that she has taken. As she does that those moments come to life and we actually show small clips of her life with her friends. It would be like a collection of flashbacks of her last moments before she leaves for college. The piece would finish with a flashback to her last moments with her friends where they all say goodbye to this chapter of their life.

Now we have to write a screenplay and begin working and continue developing our story!